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Submitted: March 3, 2008
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Done: 3.02.08

Ref pic: [link] from :iconthepropagation3:
Stained glass modeled after: [link] from :iconsentient-stock:

This is what happens when you have a good idea and then you get hella lazy. There should be more glass, the colors are messed up...and there should be more glass.

and he looks like a zombie.

More Hugo. because...I...yeah u.u

*Edit: Changed/added a few things based on suggestions and less laziness. ^__^d
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Mood: Joy *mirusama:iconmirusama: Mar 3, 2008, 5:21:52 AM
There is nothing wrong with more Hugo *nods*
Hugo and his shoes.
And an awesome idea. very awesome, indeed, and fine looking.
You're too hard on yourself, sometimes *tsks*

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~derintini:iconderintini: Mar 3, 2008, 5:59:45 AM
the glass on the floor looks a bit 2-D in comparison to the flying chunks (which are awesome, btw)

the pose is great, (perhaps his irises are a tad big) and the whole piece very dynamic.

lovely :D

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~desdemonhu:icondesdemonhu: Mar 3, 2008, 10:53:20 AM
:blushes: aww, why thank you my dear.

Yay for not being sick of Hugo! \^__^/

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~desdemonhu:icondesdemonhu: Mar 3, 2008, 10:56:33 AM
hey thanks!

I think you're right about the eyes! Maybe that's what was bothering me about them. I think I'll try and tinker with that later....and see if I can work up the patience to fix the floor bits as well XD I'm glad the flying bits look ok at least, I was kinda iffy on those as well. ^_^'

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~Jemmeh:iconJemmeh: Mar 3, 2008, 7:12:20 PM
Brilliant idea, you did a lot of good dynamic things in this piece, like breaking borders and having perspective. Mostly the glass did it, but that made the effect all the more impressive!

I did notice one thing right off the bat though. The pose seems so akward when it comes to his head. It kind of makes him look like he's falling over.

I think it's mostly in the neck area, and after staring at it a bit, it might be too long.
And then with the feet: It looks like he's floating. That's mostly fixable with a little shadow, like if you go back to your stock and look at how they did the shadow. ^__^

Still, it's a great piece and I like it a lot. : D
~desdemonhu:icondesdemonhu: Mar 3, 2008, 9:09:39 PM
gah, stupid shadow. i forgot about that. >.>

I'm glad you think it's ok *curtsey*

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~Jemmeh:iconJemmeh: Mar 4, 2008, 2:37:48 PM
No way, more than okay. And you've improved by bounds and bounds since I first saw your work. ^_^
~desdemonhu:icondesdemonhu: Mar 4, 2008, 6:09:23 PM
:blushes:
Thanks for your suggestions. While I don't always agree with you, they have been very helpful and have helped me improve ^__^d

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~sheenagami:iconsheenagami: Mar 5, 2008, 4:59:44 PM
WOW~ that's real good! i like the way u colored! especialy the glass and the bg!! :D! OOOOOO

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