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This is what happens when you have a good idea and then you get hella lazy. There should be more glass, the colors are messed up...and there should be more glass.
and he looks like a zombie.
More Hugo. because...I...yeah u.u
*Edit: Changed/added a few things based on suggestions and less laziness. ^__^d
There is nothing wrong with more Hugo *nods* Hugo and his shoes. And an awesome idea. very awesome, indeed, and fine looking. You're too hard on yourself, sometimes *tsks*
I think you're right about the eyes! Maybe that's what was bothering me about them. I think I'll try and tinker with that later....and see if I can work up the patience to fix the floor bits as well XD I'm glad the flying bits look ok at least, I was kinda iffy on those as well. ^_^'
Brilliant idea, you did a lot of good dynamic things in this piece, like breaking borders and having perspective. Mostly the glass did it, but that made the effect all the more impressive!
I did notice one thing right off the bat though. The pose seems so akward when it comes to his head. It kind of makes him look like he's falling over.
I think it's mostly in the neck area, and after staring at it a bit, it might be too long. And then with the feet: It looks like he's floating. That's mostly fixable with a little shadow, like if you go back to your stock and look at how they did the shadow. ^__^
Still, it's a great piece and I like it a lot. : D
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Hugo and his shoes.
And an awesome idea. very awesome, indeed, and fine looking.
You're too hard on yourself, sometimes *tsks*
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the pose is great, (perhaps his irises are a tad big) and the whole piece very dynamic.
lovely
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shine on, you frantic diamond
Yay for not being sick of Hugo! \^__^/
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I think you're right about the eyes! Maybe that's what was bothering me about them. I think I'll try and tinker with that later....and see if I can work up the patience to fix the floor bits as well XD I'm glad the flying bits look ok at least, I was kinda iffy on those as well. ^_^'
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I did notice one thing right off the bat though. The pose seems so akward when it comes to his head. It kind of makes him look like he's falling over.
I think it's mostly in the neck area, and after staring at it a bit, it might be too long.
And then with the feet: It looks like he's floating. That's mostly fixable with a little shadow, like if you go back to your stock and look at how they did the shadow. ^__^
Still, it's a great piece and I like it a lot. : D
I'm glad you think it's ok *curtsey*
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Thanks for your suggestions. While I don't always agree with you, they have been very helpful and have helped me improve ^__^d
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